What if there was a man with exceptional gifts driven by a fierce desire to be a legend? Any reader of the Iliad will recognize that this question is as old as Western literature. Any reader of Jed Mercurio’s Ascent will find that a novel needs more than a heroic protagonist to succeed.
The main problem with the book is that its main character’s traits are often assumed rather than developed. Yeremin, the protagonist rising through the Soviet Air Force and later the space program, is a great pilot because Mercurio says he is. He wants to be a hero so badly because of a cursory childhood scene and because the author says so. Rather than being a real person for us to commiserate with or puzzle over, Yeremin is a golem animated by the properties Mercurio has written into him. However unusual or eccentric he may be, he lacks the spark of life.
Hampered by its inscrutable characters, Ascent becomes a boring litany of events: “Yeremin is a good pilot. Watch him fly really well. Yeremin really wants to be a hero. Look at all the sacrifices he makes.” It doesn’t help that the key space scenes read like a Russian rewrite of Apollo 13. Ex-doctor, ex-pilot Mercurio tries to pull us deeper into Yeremin’s world with technical jargon and biological detail but only succeeds in making the book confusing and gross by turns. (Though if there were an award for Most Gratuitous Use of the Word Rectum, Ascent would be a shoo-in.)
At a few shining moments, the book does convey some of the hero’s deep inner passion: “He has not risen so far to emulate the achievements of other men, to choose a glory amortized by repetition; his destiny must be the perfect mission, the unique mission….” These few moments salvage some meaning for the otherwise bland novel. In the end, however, Ascent cannot make up for its lack of a meaningfully human protagonist.